WALT upload limerick and write about it
Two days ago we did a limerick poem about anything that we wanted. The rules of the poem is that it has to make no sense at all the two top lines has to have 8 or 9 syllables and line 4 and 5 had to have 5 syllables and the last word had to rhyme. Once we were done with the poem we got to decorated it with drawings.
What did I enjoy? drawing the hacker mask and the food
What can I improve on for next time? more detail
What did I learn? who do write a poem
Kia ora. I am Cameron from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you have coiled it in.
I learned how to swim when i was 5 years old
Maybe next time could mack it bigger.
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Mā te wā
Cameron
I like how you put detail in your picture and how you wrote with punctuation
ReplyDeletebut next time get me all the yugioh cards