how to use commas

WALT. upload how to use commas 

 

Last week for writing we did a slide show about how to use commas. We did a few practices on where commas go in your writing.  The slide show will help you with your writing alot iv'e highlighted where the commas go there is a good sentence with commas and not a good sentence with no commas. 

What did I enjoy: Learning where to put commas. 

What did I learn: How and where to put and use commas. 

Art

WALT upload a task for yesterday and write about it. 

Yesterday we did art with Miss Hall. It was about to choose a plant or a tree on a black peace of paper. The steps are

1. Get a black piece of paper

2. Then sketch your plant or tree 

3. Once you are done with your sketch on the black piece of paper color in realistically 

4. Add some sort of arrow pattern

5. Then you are done!!!           

Here is a picture of the finished art work.

What did I enjoy about this artwork? The shading.  

Thank you for listing to my story. 

drawing

WALT upload whatever  you want 

Today's task was to upload whatever you want to upload I. choose my drawing that I did this week.

It was a dragon ball eye. But as a sketch. It was surprisingly easy, here is a drawing of it 

I think it needs some work but what do you think of it? here are the steps to do this if you don't know dragon ball AT ALL then these are not the steps for you

1. start with the eyebrow. As you can see it is pointy at the bottom and it  gets bigger at the top 

2. at the bottom ad a short line and then ad a long line at the top 

3. ad one line to connect them both 

4. ad a half circle in the middle 

5. make it all realistic

6. you are DONE!!

what can i do better; in the eye make more detail

do you know dragon ball? 

kiwi can 5

WALT upload kiwi can and write about

Today at kiwi can we did a game called stop walk clap jump and this is how it works. If the teacher says jump you jump so on and so on. the next game we played was traffic lights what you have to do is stop is stop go is go and go slow is go slow.

This is our catchphrase right is right even when everyone is doing it wrong is wrong even when no one's doing it.

what did you enjoy: doing the games.
what did you find challenging: wining the games.









Thank you for listening. 

writing task from last week

WALT upload a writing task from last week 

Last week we did a writing task about an elephant and a crying baby. This is the sentence that I did, 

the first one is the elephant. The tired elephant was one minute from death, the grime reaper was getting ready for one more soul... 

now for the crying baby. The crying baby struggled to get up as he had just bee born.

We also had to glue in a picture and then write about it. 

what can I improve on; not put so much capitals 

how can I improve; not do so much mistakes