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Monday 3 August 2020

writing task from last week

WALT upload a writing task from last week 

Last week we did a writing task about an elephant and a crying baby. This is the sentence that I did, 
the first one is the elephant. The tired elephant was one minute from death, the grime reaper was getting ready for one more soul... 
now for the crying baby. The crying baby struggled to get up as he had just bee born.


We also had to glue in a picture and then write about it. 









what can I improve on; not put so much capitals 
how can I improve; not do so much mistakes 

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 August 2020 at 13:25

    Hi James great blog post but you could improve on making the sentences make scence and the words a bit bigger so people can read it but still a great blog post.

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  2. Anonymous4 August 2020 at 13:26

    hi James I like your blog post try to add more juicy words
    🙂



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  3. Anonymous4 August 2020 at 13:32

    hi OK Michael i will try to.

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