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Wednesday 20 May 2020

bok choy summary

W.A.L.T upload reading task 
bok choy was a good book i liked the book it was interesting to read. 
my favourite part was when he fell into the waterfall i think i was a good part of the book 


i think what the Author can make better is maybe make the righting more fancy but that is just my opinion
and this my summary righting. i enjoyed righting this it was good fun reading and righting 





Bok choy is a story about a NZ boy who came to china 
The writer is paul Mason 
The people is this story is ah-sum jacob miss bishop william 
The story starts as jacob is helping his mum and dad with the firewood miss bishop is mean to jacob and she calls him a mock and a chinese cabbage and then more bad stuff happened he falls into the river a mean river to so his day is not going well and to make it worse some slippery rocks made him go faster the next thing he knows is that he is in a chinese hut with a old man called ah-sum  but he is the only the nice one to jacob and he is nice to ah-sum jacob's mum is coming soon to see if he is okay. But miss bishop blocks there way miss bishop gives jacob's mum a stare. A stare that you will not forget. So is Jacob staring at Miss bishop. 
The end shows Ahsum looking at the sun set. 

And that is the story of bok choy 

2 comments:

  1. hi James you did a very good job on this post but next time try to add a little more punctuation but still it is very good

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  2. hi james this is good post that you have done but next time make your writing littler because it is very big.

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